(This poetry is sweet & very simple, but the reason I am posting it is its almost after six months I have written a love poetry, hopefully I haven't rusted! Wink!!)
Beyond the blue mountains I yearn for you
In the sunlight path I keep walking for you…
All my life my breath for you so patiently waited
Now with this sunset I wait for a new sunrise elated
My heart drools at the lush green leaves & the colourful sky
Making me believe my lover is somewhere nearby
And my heart again yearns for you…so yearns for you…
As if waiting for you is all I was born to do
And though I crave for you like never before
I still have the power to wait forever on this shore
Even before meeting, how I am in love I can’t comprehend
If you are listening my Guardian Angel, my lover now please do send
All these lines I write for her, but she’s the only one who doesn’t listen
Meeting her & telling her how much I already love her is now my only mission
Sometimes when I am alone, I wish I could hold her hands & softly rub them
To irritate each other to entice again thousand reasons we would invent lame
On winter nights as I would embrace her like my child
On hot summers I wouldn’t mind her going all wild!
I so want to feel her wink ever assuring me nothing can go wrong
Her head on my chest as we together sing our favourite song
Walking on the soft sand on the beach as we play with salt water & our eyes
Seeing her laugh knowing there are things truly beyond any pain & ties
Enjoying each other’s silence in cold rain through our glass window
The most comfy secure feeling of being each other’s shadow high or low
My prayers would be answered soon something tells me
A teardrop of passionate love will flow as soon as her I will see
Beyond the blue mountains I yearn for you
In the sunlight path I keep walking for you…
I really don’t know how, but I already love you…
~ Abhik Choudhury, Apr 25th 2010
In the sunlight path I keep walking for you…
All my life my breath for you so patiently waited
Now with this sunset I wait for a new sunrise elated
My heart drools at the lush green leaves & the colourful sky
Making me believe my lover is somewhere nearby
And my heart again yearns for you…so yearns for you…
As if waiting for you is all I was born to do
And though I crave for you like never before
I still have the power to wait forever on this shore
Even before meeting, how I am in love I can’t comprehend
If you are listening my Guardian Angel, my lover now please do send
All these lines I write for her, but she’s the only one who doesn’t listen
Meeting her & telling her how much I already love her is now my only mission
Sometimes when I am alone, I wish I could hold her hands & softly rub them
To irritate each other to entice again thousand reasons we would invent lame
On winter nights as I would embrace her like my child
On hot summers I wouldn’t mind her going all wild!
I so want to feel her wink ever assuring me nothing can go wrong
Her head on my chest as we together sing our favourite song
Walking on the soft sand on the beach as we play with salt water & our eyes
Seeing her laugh knowing there are things truly beyond any pain & ties
Enjoying each other’s silence in cold rain through our glass window
The most comfy secure feeling of being each other’s shadow high or low
My prayers would be answered soon something tells me
A teardrop of passionate love will flow as soon as her I will see
Beyond the blue mountains I yearn for you
In the sunlight path I keep walking for you…
I really don’t know how, but I already love you…
~ Abhik Choudhury, Apr 25th 2010
12 comments:
3rd para nd the cold rain thing...aint u just great at dis...n u doubt if u hav rusted !!!
:-)
the poem, the words, the emotions, the thought are nothing without you - its you who give them meaning and make it so much more alive, so close :)
ps : its iron that rusts not gold; writing or not i dont think i'll see you anywhere less than shining in subtle glory of being pure :)
...yaar what not to say...exactly..its so full of pure feelings nd emotions..one can almost wander into these beautifully written lines..ur d best...but one thing lacks....???
meri flower girl wali promise.... :(
There is a great lover hidden somewhere inside u..actually ur poem brought a smile on my face..great work abhi..way to go!! :)
heyyy its simply awesome.i loved evry word of it.i ve nt read such beautiful romantic poem before how can one be so perfect.hats off:-)
its beautiful beyond words!!!!!!
Speechless... yet again!! Simply amazing & as already said, beyond words!!
Thanks friends. Your words make me blush & smile like a little kid, who just got a bunch of his fav. chocolates as a reward!:-) U all are just greatttttt!! Thanks!!
giving words to a feeling so divine is an accomplishment in itself .....beautifully written:-)
abhik...its lovely...finally maine ye padh li...y did i take so long to read dis poem?? its amazing yaar
sweet poem..very cute...in my words bole to 'lovey-dovey' both kind ov people vil b able to relate to it:those who r committed coz they will imagine being vid d person dey luv n also those waiting 4 their love..rather YEARNING 4 their luv.n as rachita rightfully said gold neva rusts,n so vont u!
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